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Sunday, May 3, 2015

some notes for the edit of my road

As those of you who read more than one post sporadically know, I wrote my road in 30 days (maybe 35, but who is counting?  I am trying to edit it in 15 (maybe 20).  It was finished at around 40,000 words and edited should be closer to 70, right now its just over 60.  From a minimal book or large novella to novel length.
Here are some thoughts on religion from the edits:
The last thing a bug thinks before it hits a windshield is "everything happens for a reason."  The last thing a bug says to another before they both hit the windshield is "everything is going to be alr..."

I'm also dealing with racial issues, so some of the thoughts include that white people shoudl invite the minorities into their secret societies and fraternities now.  The should make them the presidents of their corporations and the leaders of their governments while they are still in a position to control, train if you would, them.  Eventually they will be there anyway.
In fact, there are very few true minorities in this country.  The reason is that there was so much forced prostitution in the slave trade that the races were indelibly  and we are now combining social status, usually forced by an unfair system, and skin color to distinguish people who are largely indistinguishable.


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